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Ryuman

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Re: Bimbofication Comic
« Reply #210 on: March 17, 2020, 11:00:45 pm »
Thanks for the comments, appreciated. I'll try to answer one by one.

Here's my take on the question:

  • I absolutely loved how all the characters acted intelligently and in control about all this. Sure, they were all crazy and they were doing dangerous stuff, but they had good reasons and dealt with it in a smart way.

I'm not personally a fan of the dumb bimbo thing. I wanted my characters to retain their intelligence and do what they were doing primarily because of personal desire.

  • I also liked how you increased the scope of the story gradually, without unloading too much on the reader at the same time. You started small and kept growing it, always adding small elements until it was a completely different story. That made the whole work easy to understand and also gave you the option (in my opinion) to stop at any time, preventing a hanging end should anything go wrong.

Originally I hadn't intended to go anywhere near so far. I was probably going to stop about episode 9-12 originally, when Jess was fully in her 'bimbo' form, but as I kept thinking of new things ended up going a lot further!

  • Also, thank you very, very much for giving it away for free. That is a lot of work and I can only appreciate that you provided a massive turn on free of charge. That is very generous.

Hey, no problem. I felt odd at the idea of charging for it as the quality is really not great and I was largely doing it for my self anyway. Happy to share!

As to a new story, just some thoughts I had:
  • Again, please keep the scope tight. I loved the intimacy and the way the story progressed.
  • If anything, maybe differentiate some of the characters a bit more clearly. Since they change a lot, they can get hard to connect to their former looks. Maybe give each one a color scheme or a unique speech bubble. That might reinforce the power of the transformation.
  • When it comes to the plot, I love transformation stories, especially about characters taking control of their bodies and turning them into their dreams. The artificiality is part of the process of freeing themselves.

In no particular order, here are some more transformation elements that could come up:
  • Piercings all over
  • Muscles and bodybuilding (even with steroids)
  • Leg lengthening
  • Pussy and clit pumping
  • Tongue splitting
  • Tongue lengthening (Is that even possible?)
  • Gaining weight for a Brazilian Butt Lift
  • Bigger thighs
  • Yoga and flexibility training

Lots of interesting ones on there, but unfortunately a lot of boxes that aren't hugely exciting to me. I prefer the 'skinny bimbo look. Tit's on a stick kind of affair, so thicker thighs and muscles are unlikely to be prevalent. I may through in a supporting character like that though.

I'd like to play further with enchancements though. Leg lengthening is possible as well as tendon shortening and maybe some things I've not thought about...


I'd also love some short glimpses into the characters' day to day lives, how normal people react to them and how their modifications impact their routines. (Bumping into things with newly enlarged boobs or butts, spent some time getting ready for the day or just pandering themselves.)

This is something I should have done and if I have time I will do this in the future. Its just about how much time and effort those scenes require. But yes, I should add more!

Finally, I am a sucker for latex outfits, including bodysuits and masks and I enjoy the idea of dressing down in public but knowing the full sexiness underneath - The lady in the streets/freak in the sheets thing.

Not against either of those things, so definitely thoughts for the future.

Thanks for the feedback, it's really useful to know what people liked or didn't like. I appreciate that.
R

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Re: Bimbofication Comic
« Reply #211 on: March 18, 2020, 10:45:13 am »
Here are some plot ideas that I've been thinking about recently. If any of them inspire you, feel free to take them.

  • Two college girls somehow come up with the idea that the rather slobby nerd male student is the next Bill Gates or Jeff Bezos and decide to seduce him to get him before he strikes it rich. They figure out his fetishes (guess which ones) and go ahead. Competing, they enhance themselves more and more, doing their best to win him over. However, the guy is actually just a normal dude. He's mostly confused by what is happening, but rolls with it. Once they figure out what is going on, they have to figure out how to solve this, after all, they've been racking up bills for their looks.
  • A recently laid-off woman inherits a nightclub/bar/stripclub from her aunt which the family ostracized because of her lifestyle choices. Faced with bankruptcy, she takes her chances and tries running the club. She adapts to the new setting, both physically and mentally. After a while, it turns out that her aunt disappeared for very specific reasons which involve the mob. Also, it is unclear whether she's really dead. The main character does get useful advice from a senior stripper who is certainly not her.
  • A female plastic surgeon and her investor friend take up a Pygmalion-style arrangement and plan to transform a willing woman into his dream lover. As in the play, things escalate in all kinds of ways.
  • A girl from a very conservative religious environment ends up in a more open and !sinful! environment. She likes it and starts to change. Then, her family shows up and wants to take her back home. Hiding her transformation is a little difficult and hijinx ensue.
  • A young woman who is rather ugly and feels unsexy gets together with an equally unimpressive partner and they decide to change their lives, fulfilling their dreams of being sexy, rich and awesome.

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Re: Bimbofication Comic
« Reply #212 on: March 20, 2020, 12:28:13 am »
Here are some plot ideas that I've been thinking about recently. If any of them inspire you, feel free to take them.

  • Two college girls somehow come up with the idea that the rather slobby nerd male student is the next Bill Gates or Jeff Bezos and decide to seduce him to get him before he strikes it rich. They figure out his fetishes (guess which ones) and go ahead. Competing, they enhance themselves more and more, doing their best to win him over. However, the guy is actually just a normal dude. He's mostly confused by what is happening, but rolls with it. Once they figure out what is going on, they have to figure out how to solve this, after all, they've been racking up bills for their looks.
  • A recently laid-off woman inherits a nightclub/bar/stripclub from her aunt which the family ostracized because of her lifestyle choices. Faced with bankruptcy, she takes her chances and tries running the club. She adapts to the new setting, both physically and mentally. After a while, it turns out that her aunt disappeared for very specific reasons which involve the mob. Also, it is unclear whether she's really dead. The main character does get useful advice from a senior stripper who is certainly not her.
  • A female plastic surgeon and her investor friend take up a Pygmalion-style arrangement and plan to transform a willing woman into his dream lover. As in the play, things escalate in all kinds of ways.
  • A girl from a very conservative religious environment ends up in a more open and !sinful! environment. She likes it and starts to change. Then, her family shows up and wants to take her back home. Hiding her transformation is a little difficult and hijinx ensue.
  • A young woman who is rather ugly and feels unsexy gets together with an equally unimpressive partner and they decide to change their lives, fulfilling their dreams of being sexy, rich and awesome.

I particularly like the last two. Both of those would be interesting...

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Re: Bimbofication Comic
« Reply #213 on: March 20, 2020, 10:25:54 am »
As I said, if you feel inspired, take what you want!

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Re: Bimbofication Comic
« Reply #214 on: March 20, 2020, 06:15:33 pm »
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A young woman who is rather ugly and feels unsexy gets together with an equally unimpressive partner and they decide to change their lives, fulfilling their dreams of being sexy, rich and awesome.


these ideas are promising. The last one could be very interesting, it could a brother/sister duo or a young couple who just inherits a good chunk of money. They could start to hit the gym, get surgery or try some very expensive experimental hormones.  When the money start to ran out, they realized they're hooked to their expensive lifestyle and the body modifications so they could turn their instagram accounts into something more dirty like the models who post nudes and sexy vids on onlyfans.

Eventually they met other camgirls  and pornstars who encourage them to post dirtier pics and vids, could start with light lesbian teasing but turn into full hardcore vids since they got more money with them. They could also have a more open relationships, going into swingers party...
« Last Edit: March 20, 2020, 07:11:36 pm by bob10 »
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Re: Bimbofication Comic
« Reply #215 on: March 21, 2020, 04:36:30 pm »
I’m considering doing a full ‘reimagining’ of this story, but including things I missed and removing the parts I don’t like.

Also have an idea for a quicker story of an Instagram girl gradually transforming hardly original I know)

Other ideas would be a more sci fi based story, possibly in a cyberpunk type setting though I have less ideas on how a plot would actually develop.

I thinking though!

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Re: Bimbofication Comic
« Reply #216 on: March 21, 2020, 07:18:45 pm »
Do you need help for the brainstorming process?
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Re: Bimbofication Comic
« Reply #217 on: March 21, 2020, 07:24:01 pm »
I’m considering doing a full ‘reimagining’ of this story, but including things I missed and removing the parts I don’t like.

Also have an idea for a quicker story of an Instagram girl gradually transforming hardly original I know)

Other ideas would be a more sci fi based story, possibly in a cyberpunk type setting though I have less ideas on how a plot would actually develop.

I thinking though!

Either is great! Maybe doing a shorter story next might be a good idea to make sure you don't burn out.


What were the parts you didn't like?

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Re: Bimbofication Comic
« Reply #218 on: March 22, 2020, 08:50:18 pm »
found this thread today an read the whole story afterwards.
Fantastic work!

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Re: Bimbofication Comic
« Reply #219 on: March 23, 2020, 04:17:27 pm »
found this thread today an read the whole story afterwards.
Fantastic work!

Thanks for that, glad you have enjoyed it! I realise it’s not high quality renders like some of the great 3D artists are doing, but hopefully the story worked well enough anyway.

Anything you’d like to have seen different or seen more of?

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Re: Bimbofication Comic
« Reply #220 on: March 23, 2020, 07:15:22 pm »
Cinderella and her fairy god mother

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Re: Bimbofication Comic
« Reply #221 on: April 12, 2020, 03:23:38 pm »
Personnaly I think this story should end with a big orgy with the 2 sisters and their friends. The sisters celebrating Jess's successful movies and her sister's award for best newcomer
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Re: Bimbofication Comic
« Reply #222 on: May 01, 2020, 04:47:48 pm »
Any updates?

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Re: Bimbofication Comic
« Reply #223 on: May 26, 2020, 08:06:34 pm »
I’m considering doing a full ‘reimagining’ of this story, but including things I missed and removing the parts I don’t like.

Also have an idea for a quicker story of an Instagram girl gradually transforming hardly original I know)

Other ideas would be a more sci fi based story, possibly in a cyberpunk type setting though I have less ideas on how a plot would actually develop.

I thinking though!

How about a collaboration... like, between you and SaidNuffman?  Could be epic!

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Re: Bimbofication Comic
« Reply #224 on: May 26, 2020, 08:23:35 pm »
Unfortunately not. I will probably be retiring this 'software' when this project is done as its pretty old and useless. Hopefully now I have a more powerful rig I will be able to learn some better stuff and really push some extremes. What for that will take and how long it will be till I can do anything is anyone's guess however.

Thank you! It's quite the ride.

I have to ask, what sort of mods were you thinking? What other changes would you like to see for future projects.

Given I'm probably only a single chapter until this is done, I'm already thinking of the next story, so any suggestion on what people would like more, or less, of, would be great.

Also any ideas for future stories, or angles that I might not have considered, would be well received. Improvements that I can make etc?

Everyone feel free to message me directly or post here any thoughts at all.

Thanks!
R

I, for one, would like to see a little more focus on partying. For some reason a slow-burn on alcohol and drug corruption appeals to me almost as much as surgically enhanced 'tits-on-a-stick' stories do all by themselves. Put those two together and forget it! You'd be a legend in my book... though, you're unforgettable already. Thank you for sharing all your hard work!

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