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Plastic surgery stories writing (help request )
« on: February 19, 2022, 09:25:37 pm »
Hello
I'm writing a story (the first of many in my mind) about "plastic surgery against will ".
I'm also producing some render images, something like  https://www.deviantart.com/saidnuffman.. or https://www.deviantart.com/bimborevolution
to illustrate it...
unfortunately english is not my first language.... Is there anyone who want to help me revisioning and correcting it?
I could send the story via PM, and once ok I'm going to post here...
I can reward my helper/s with story preview, and illustrations....
You can see some render example in my just opened devian art site...
https://www.deviantart.com/fakelover75

Thank you in advance.
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Re: Plastic surgery stories writing (help request )
« Reply #1 on: February 22, 2022, 02:58:28 pm »
what is your main language ?

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Re: Plastic surgery stories writing (help request )
« Reply #2 on: February 24, 2022, 01:19:57 am »
just go ahead and post your rough draft here, be courageous

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Re: Plastic surgery stories writing (help request )
« Reply #3 on: February 25, 2022, 12:53:48 am »
I can help you out

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Re: Plastic surgery stories writing (help request )
« Reply #4 on: February 25, 2022, 10:37:14 am »
just go ahead and post your rough draft here, be courageous
It's not a courage matter, but I'm was searching help....  may be I could post it  here also... just like a preview...  and see if someone Is that genty to review the text....


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Re: Plastic surgery stories writing (help request )
« Reply #5 on: February 25, 2022, 10:37:55 am »
I can help you out
Thanks... I'll send it to you in PM.
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Re: Plastic surgery stories writing (help request )
« Reply #6 on: March 06, 2022, 01:15:15 am »
I did my best....
Patreons: The story about a kidnapped girl who is forced to undergo to a lot of plastic surgeries by a rich man, who get s rewarded by patreon subscribers

Here it's... please consider English is not my first language... If you want to review it, feel free to message me the new version and I will post it here. Thanks.

Scene 1: Jasmine Introduction
Mr S: Good morning Mr. Black.
Mr B: Hi, Mr. Smith So Is that my stuff?
Yes that’s it, She is Jasmine, but you can rename her as you prefer. Jas say hello to your new daddy in law.
J: Hi, Mr Black.
Immediately the man slapped Jasmine face. I told you to call Mr. Black "Master"
J: Good morning master.
Mr B: Oh you can call me Tony Jasmine ...
J: Thank you Tony ...
Mr S: So, let me show you all Jasmine characteristics, you asked for Mr. Black.
19 years young, 😉 Caucasian woman, 1.75cm tall girl, she has big tits although quite sloppy, she got some body fat, we put her on diet, but during 3 month she stayed with us…. She lost just 2kg .., she has long legs… and a good ass……
Take off your shirt Jas… and show your tits… to Tony.
Jasmine obeyed ..
Mr S: Here they are… really big, even quite saggy for a 19 years old… while he grab her left tit.
T: It Doesn’t care, we are going to fix it, indeed I’d say they are just perfect….just  empty sacks we are going to fill with so much silicone , right from first time.
A grin appeared on Tony’s face, while Jasmine got scared…. What was going to happen to her tits?
Mr. Smith: She is very flexible as she is  able to stretch and do many yoga difficult positions, even lift heavy weights ad much more… do you jas?
Jasmin nodded and looked down.
Mr S: Regarding your special requests, it was quite difficult to find out  a girl like Jas with “wide space between her legs”, I can not understand what that space is supposed to serve…, If she has to work as *WOMAN*, as I can imagine, a pretty face would have been better then the “don’t care Jas’ one”. BTW as you can see she has wide space between legs… ready to be filled by cocks. Right Mr Smith?
T: Indeed, that room space will be filled with much more hard things than a cock….
Nor jasmine neither MR Smith understood what Tony was saying…
Mr. Smith: Let you daddy see it Jas, pull up you skirt and show you pussy…
A scared and embarrassed Jasmine obeyed immediately showing her  near perfectly shaved pubic.
Mr S:  And last but not the least…., as you requested, she is already plugged and used to wear buttplug h24.
Please Jas turn aroud on your feet and show your plugged arse to Mr. Black.
Jasmine turned and bended her body a bit, spreading her ass revealing a red 3-4cm wide red butt plug plugged in her ass.
Indeed she is able to take wider ones, but we delivery her with a small one to let you the pleasure to filling her ass.
T: You are right, That buttplug is definitely too small… but we are going to fix it soon also.
Both man laughed.
T: Jasmine I’d like to know how do you feel being plugged, buttplugged 24h per day?
Jasmine did not answered…
T: Jasmine I ‘ll not ask you again… how do you feel being buttplugged 24h per day?
“I feel good.” A scared Jasmine answered first thing came  in her mind.
Good girl. I like girls who like to stay all day with their arsehole stretched. You can  take your clothes on.
T: Great work Mr. Smith. I was advised of you recruiting services were the best on the market.
Mr S: Yes, they are. Here there are her documents, id card, passport and immigration documents.
As you know, the “just in case of troubles” option is included, and Jas is aware of it, so no problem can arise.. Mr Smith winked.
Perfect answered Mr. Black. So here it is you 200.000$. He opened a Briefcase bag revealing plenty of bills inside…
Mr S: Magnificent. So It was a pleasure to do business with you Mr. Black!
T: Me too..
Mr S: Just a curiosity… What are you going to do with her? Use her as anal *WOMAN*, but with that… face, she should not  be so profitable… maybe you are using as sex slave…
Ohhh nothing of this.. Nowadays there are many more pleasant and easier ways to do money with girls. I’d say to you to stay tuned on Internet and socials media….. in the following months… you will hear talking about….. keywork carr…y… sil...
Mr. Smith laughed.
The Men took their leave. Mr. Smith left Tony’s office, with the money bag.
T: Jas, follow me to your room please…
J: Yes Tony…
« Last Edit: March 06, 2022, 01:43:31 am by fake2max »

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Re: Plastic surgery stories writing (help request )
« Reply #7 on: March 09, 2022, 02:49:41 pm »
In Scene 1 there were/are some errors.. Voluntarily I let them in to see if readers are paying attention...  ;D
Please PM me at least biggest errors... Thanks in advance.

BTW Scene 1 and 2 are already rendered.... soon I'll post something on deviant art....  the whole story on patreon....

Scene 2: Jasmine’s room
Tony conducted Jasmine to the upper floor, where there were a lot of flats, each of them reported a name on the main door… they entered in one named “Carry Silicone”, and then in a bedroom.
This is your room for next months. As you can see there is all the comforts, even a complete warehouse and a shoes collection.
The bedroom was like barbie’s one, main things color was pink, everything was like a charm, although there were many odd objects. Buttplugs were everywhere. A rack was full of them, of every shapes, color s and dimensions. Some of them were impressive in dimensions. They will never fit in any arse Jas thought.
Tony interrupted Jas’ thoughts.
T: Please get dressed with some good clothes and appropriate shoes, and get your make up done… there are plenty of makeups over there.. I will wait you in my office in 30 min to evaluate your style, then we will talk about your buttplug size  and  its policy. I’m going to decide your first duties. There is a lot of work to do for you and on you.
One last recommendation, but I’m sure you will not have difficulties to accomplish to it, put on higher heels than you are wearing now.  I hate girls in low or, worse, no heels at all.
Jasmine was shocked by what was going on. Her mind was still to that day when her father sold her to the mafia for less then 10.000$. She nodded without thinking…
Tony left.
Jasmine was unable to move, she sat on pouf, thinking to nothing and all at same time…. Meanwhile time passed…..
She realized something was wrong on when Tony’s entered in the room slamming the door….
T: What are you doing? didn’t you hear what I said? Get properly dressed. Hurry up! Your punishment to be late will be proportional to your late.
J: Punishment?
T: Yes, I hate late girls… I will punish you to be late…
Tony left.
Jasmine tried to regain some clarity, and tried to change her clothes…
As she opened the wardrobe, she found out that it was plenty only of dresses, supposed just for stripper or *WOMAN*s…. Micro-skirts and skin revealing cloths. 
Shoes were no less vulgar…. There were just very high platform heels, she had never seen shoes like that…
She tried to get dressed as decent as possible…. Thinking to impress… and mixing in right way things… then she put as much makeup as she can on her face.
30min later she was leaving her room trying to balance on a 6.5” platform heels walking to the Tony’s office.

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Re: Plastic surgery stories writing (help request )
« Reply #8 on: March 10, 2022, 07:47:42 pm »
Hi, to me it sounds like a good start. Go on please, we would be happy. 😉👍🏻
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Re: Plastic surgery stories writing (help request )
« Reply #9 on: March 10, 2022, 09:54:38 pm »
I like your direction but there are so many spelling, grammatical and structural errors that this is nearly unreadable. You should pass this through a spell checker at a minimum before asking for advice online.

Personally, I'm not a huge fan of screenplays either, but I suppose that's up to your discretion. At least don't rename the character prompts midway through (Mr B to "T")

Here are some examples of issues:

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J: Hi, Mr Black.
Immediately the man slapped Jasmine face. I told you to call Mr. Black "Master"
J: Good morning master.

* "Immediately", "suddenly," etc – these terms provide no meaning in a story. Every action a character takes is immediate unless otherwise noted.
* Here, "the man" incorrectly refers to the previous line's "Mr. Black," instead of your desired "Mr. Smith"
* If you intend to write this as a screenplay, every line of dialogue needs a starting designation of character. You have provided no explicit indication here that "I told you..." is spoken aloud, nor who said it.
* Screenplays generally have stage directions written in present tense, not past.
* You intermittently are leaving off a period from "Mr." throughout your writing

Let's rewrite:

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J: H-hi, Mr. Black.
Mr. Smith steps forward and slaps the prone girl across the cheek. Jasmine yelps in surprise.
Mr. S: Now Jasmine, remember our training. Try again.
J: Hi... master.

I have a feeling you're writing this as a screenplay because you're not confident enough to write this in a narrative. It sure would read better, though. Here's my rewrite of your intro in a narrative, third-person, present tense rewrite:

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"Good morning, Mr. Black."

"Mr. Smith! Just the man I was looking for. I take it this is my new toy?"

"Good eye – we can call her Jasmine for now. Now, let's see if she can say hello."

With a small nudge of the man's boot, the prone teen hatefully allows, "H-hello."

"Now, Jasmine, remember your training. What's your new dad's proper name?"

The girl glares defiantly back at the man as a beat passes. He grins and strides towards her, boots clicking underneath, before smacking her across the cheek.

See how much more world building you can do in a narrative style? A lot of that isn't possible in a screenplay.

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Re: Plastic surgery stories writing (help request )
« Reply #10 on: March 10, 2022, 11:41:16 pm »
I like your direction but there are so many spelling, grammatical and structural errors that this is nearly unreadable. You should pass this through a spell checker at a minimum before asking for advice online.

Personally, I'm not a huge fan of screenplays either, but I suppose that's up to your discretion. At least don't rename the character prompts midway through (Mr B to "T")
....
Thanks for your review vlad-shark...
In particular I appreciated your narrative "version"...

You are right I did my best writing in the simplest way i can manage. As I stated, English is not my first languages, and sentences like

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before smacking her across the cheek.
are not present in my mind, as I do not know that...
Moreover in the "final" version I will insert many render images...  where, I hope/think a screenplay suits better....

Regarding spelling, I already use a spell checker... i will pay more attention.
Regarding Renaming, I though it could be "clear", Mr.  B. and Mr. S, was "useful" in the initial stages, then a more friendly "Tony" was ok.....

I'd be glad if you could "review" my story,  as I know it's a big work, I do not pretend a completely  rewrite, but just to get it in a readable way.

Take in account, at the moment the story is made up by more then 44 Scene and more then 200 images (already rendered)

Even if is not that good I'd  like to publish it... because it was a really big effort...

Thank you in advance

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Re: Plastic surgery stories writing (help request )
« Reply #11 on: March 11, 2022, 12:25:49 am »
Scene 3: 1st Tony’s checkup
Jasmine was back in Tony’s Office.
T: Oh-h you arrived…. 20min late…. Later I’ll let you know your punishment.
T: So, let me see how you are dressed…. Please turn around…
Jasmine obeyed….
T: Ok, what do you think?
J: I did my best, I Donnno how to get dress, I did my best… all dresses were… I mean I had never wear something like that… even the shoes I’m not able to walk on these heels… they are too high, I have never walked in shoes that high, …..
Tony interrupted her.
T: Ok. Let me help you. Pay attention. When you are here at home there is a dress code. This was a test to understand your level.. I’ll let you a paper with all details… now… I’m going to highlighting the biggest errors you did.
First, your buttplug! At home it has to be always clearly visible! I have to be always aware of how much your arsehole is stretched. Please confirm you had understood!
J.: Yes Tony.
T: Good. You can cover it just when we exit. Then panties is not allowed, while skirt is mandatory. The belly has to be mainly exposed. Only platform shoes are allowed, and heel height has to be at least 7 inches, depending on buttplug size (you will find a math formula on your policies regulations).
Finally, you must wear a lot of make-up, much more then that you are wearing now, get nails done and they have to be long and polished. A beauty salon is waiting for you.
Jasmine was shocked… and covered her mouth whit her hand….
T: Later You will go to the beauty salon and fix that…
Please tell me you have understand… and repeat.
J: Yes Tony, I need more makeup, hair and nails done, and I have to get dressed in a way my buttplug is always visible, ….
T: Ok. Now, back on your future…. I prefer you read what will go on in the following months…. By yourself. Please read this document!
Tony handed to Jasmine a notebook titled “Carry Silicone evolution”
Jasmine begun to read….
J: In the following months I will undergo to as many as possible plastic surgeries my body will permit. Surgeries aimed to pump on my body as much silicone as possible. My Tits will be ridiculous inflated, way bigger than basketball balls, and my butt will not deserve a less radical treatment. My face will get completely modified and by botox, vshape surgery, cheekbones implants, and My lips will also be inflated by means of implants ‘til they will be face dominant, they will be so puffy. I will be no more able to speak, and so hard avoiding being closed, letting me drool even when I will not be sucking cocks, the only thing my mouth will be able to do properly.
A waist reduction will allow to accomplish to a perfect hourglass figure.
But this is just the beginning on my transformation into a perfect complete fuck blowup doll. My genitals end intimate parts will be also modified to allow extreme sex practices, in particular to anal sex. Bigger and bigger buttplug will be wear h24 till complete loose my ass, enabling double man fisting.
All process will be documented on social networks, letting my master do some money by my transformations. Supporter will decide procedures and the level of them by means of surveys.
My master allows me to avoid the surgery taking on humiliating procedures.
In this way the grade of my transformation will depend by myself.
This process will last 2 years. After that I will be allowed to leave.
Jasmine moved her head up speechless looking to Tony…
T: So, what do you think? I suppose to spend more than 100K dollars in your surgeries, but I hope to earn much more from your “patreons” on internet…. They will think to pay for your surgeries… but as we get an according with a plastic surgeon clinic (a friend of mine), and the fact that we…. “will modify” payments… to maximize profits…..
Do you like plastic surgery?
No answer….
Oh, indeed they will be quite extreme…. You know the more extreme the more incomings… and “patreons” are exigent… carrying around 20liter of saline in each breast, is not a joke… but by the time you will get used to…. Indeed, as I mentioned before you can avoid them, but you know… I’m a businessman, I have to be rewarded, so I got many friends pay for some “sex procedure”, indeed some modifications are always necessary, as you are not that pretty, and especially you need some mandatory enhancements…  my friends love…. But they will be “minor” …. Respects the other ones.
So, do you have any question?
Nothing?
How do you feel?
I know at the beginning It seems hard, but trust me by the time You will be accustomed to the new you… I can assure it, many girls in the past went through that process… and they leave from here quite happy. all of them now got a job (in porn) and are quite happy… perhaps you want to see them before and after…. Please look to my computer screen…
This is Jemma… when she started
Here is after 6months and 22 procedures….
Then after 1 year and over 50 procedures …
I do not show you her after 2 years… instead I can show you…. Hanna…. With her breasts…  and after 18months… Hanna’s breasts with Hanna….. it was incredible how many liters of saline her patrons inflated in her chest……….
Then came Sofia….. 0, 20 surgeries… final release….
So now please move on and change your cloths with proper ones…..
Ahhh your punishment…. I think 1 hour for every minute of late could be sufficient… you will begin tomorrow. To help you in your duties, and self-punishment a personal styler nurse will help you. Lisa is a very expert in doll style, you have a lot to learn from her.
Tony pressed the intercom button: “Lisa, please come over.”
Few seconds later, the main door opened, and a bizarre nurse figure appeared.
A blonde-haired girl, 1.80mt tall, with her 7inch platform heels, she was less than 1.60cm but with such heels she gets a completely freak figure, even because her rack. A basketbally like breast hang out from her chest covered by a micro latex top. But the freakier thing was  her face to be very impressive, her lips were face dominant.
L: Lisa will be glad to get fucked hard in her ass by you Tony, or at least give you a BJ and swallow!
T: Hi, Lisa.  As you can see Jasmine, Lisa has her great way to greet. This is Jasmine, she is going to enter in a Patreon program. So please let her record the introduction videos and pics and create the Patreon personal page….
You will take her to the beauty salon to get her nails and hair done. Please, teach her how to dress and regulations about buttplugs and more… you know… we need to be ready for first plastic surgery as soon as possible…. the faster the better the more money we will be able to gain.
L: Yes, Tony. What will be her Patreon channel name?
T: Carry Silicone.
Lisa took Jasmine to her room and help her to record some video and set up Carry Silicone Patreon ’s page.

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Re: Plastic surgery stories writing (help request )
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Re: Plastic surgery stories writing (help request )
« Reply #13 on: March 16, 2022, 01:06:07 am »
Please let me know major errors... thanks in advance.

Scene 4: Getting Lisa’s help
L: You are a real disaster, especially your lips…. Did Tony say nothing about them?
J: What do you mean?
L: Tony hates girls with thin lips… and worse girls who do not try to hide them behind some heavy makeup… you put just some lipstick on them… and no border…. A complete mess ... You were very lucky… .. I'm surprised he didn't mention some special treatments… perhaps he was distracted by your tits, and thoughts about how big they could become… you got that “sacks” ... I cannot imagine how much silicone you could carry around…. When I arrived here, I was just a A cup, and now can you see my breasts?
J: Ehmmm mmmmh ... Yes ...
L: Which size do you think they are now?
J: Donnow… what size are your breast?
L: 4000cc each!
Jasmine was speechless ..
L: If you didn’t hear…. Tony mentioned 20.000cc for yours… can you imagine what that could mean?
J: It is not possible! How can a woman function with such breast, I’ll go to the police ...
A panicked Jasmine said …
L: Oh-h everything is possible for Tony. He got money, a lot of money, billions of money, and with money .. he can do everything!!!his surgeon is good medicinal, but really “dumb”, and you will sign-up consensus for every surgery procedure.
J: Really?
L: Baby, you have to work hard to go out from here to be still able to talk…. Tony is particular careful to assure every mod is permanent… .. he could pump your lips to size you cannot imagine …….Moreover, he is convinced about the bigger lips, the better BJ, so you will need to practice a lot on BJ if you don't want your lips become bigger then your face. Ahh a suggestion, do not try to escape… Tony corrupted police agents would catch you, and you will regret that attempt… with all yourself!
So, don't you try to escape! It is a suggest. Just concentrate to get the minor mods you can ... Now let's put on some more makeup ...
Jasmine was really in panic the situation was out of control… .what was going on? It seemed be definitely a nightmare, she tried to wake up… but It did not work….
L: Ok now let me help you to makeover… First, you need to get fake eyelashes… Remember for Tony the faker the better….You have to do it by yourself, as I cannot manage to help you with my 2 inches fingernails .. do your best, later we ask to fix them at the beauty salon… Then you need a lot of foundation… your skin must be covered…. A heavy blusher, and heavy eyes makeup… we just keep some margin.. just in case Tony would ask form more….
L: Don’t worry, as you face will be pumped by implants and surgeries, we will able to use less makeup… until then.. you need to put lipstick beyond your lips… much out of them…. You have those thin lips…. Great… now get undress…
L: We will try to choose some right clothes… take some clothes from wardrobe. As you know Tony loves Latex… the more latex you wear…. Have I to continue? Indeed, I’d say you choose a good looking one…if you were in a normal world… Here you have to wear like a whore…
Jasmine continued to follow Lisa instructions, without saying a word…
L: Take this skirt….do you remember? Your buttplug has to be exposed… this matches the case….
Lisa handed to Jasmine a very sexy tight skirt, normal on the front… while it exposed her thighs and her butt, by means of just 4 strips linking the left and right side of the front latex-like semi transparent fabric.
L:You got a really saggy big tits… you should not have problems to get them exposed… Tony check up the parameters by himself… oh my god…. I Did not notice….
Lisa was scared like she had seen a ghost….
L: You are out of regulations….. I think Tony did not notice…. You had better to try to impress in the following meeting with him…. Buttplug size x 2.5 + heels size >= 30… What size are you wearing?
A confused Jasmine was no able to answer… a blowup doll was asking her what size of buttplug she was wearing? She though “ what kind of nightmare is this?” 
L:Turn! And take it out…
Jasmine did not understand…
L: Turn around on your feet and pull that plug out of your arse!
J: what?
Lisa pulled Jas by one hand make her turn around and then she put Jas's hand between her glutes pulling her buttplug out….
L: Push
Jasmine obeyed and pulled out buttplug from her anus… As Lisa saw the buttplug… she burst out laughing.
L: That is a 2cm wide buttplug… is ridiculous, neither when I started to wear buttplugs I got one that small..
L: What size are you able to wear comfortably?
J: I don’t know, I have never worn buttplug, I started 2 days ago when they plugged me for…. What they called “delivery”…
L: so, you are not aware what size you are able to wear…. Take in consideration you have to be plugged 24H per day… and  tony will increment the sum of equation result during time…. So you have to begin to stretch it as soon as possible… If you don’t want to go out on 40cm heels… and worse, get Tony angry…. Now let me check what can we do… try to put on this….. It should be quite comfortable… I wear one similar, Tony is quite happy I wear this type…
Lisa handed her a 4cm wide buttplug…. Jasmine did not know what to do…..
L:  Bend over.. I will help you….
The two girls, worked on Jasmine butthole as a team, and, with some trouble and a bit of pain Jasmine managed to get it in quite easily…
L: you are lucky, You got  a good stretching arsehole…
J: It hurts!!
L: I know, just a Lil ‘bit… It will go away in a few time….as your arsehole get used to it… remember this is just a start… Tony is really demanding on ass hole stretching…. You have to get used to stretch it… as much as you can… I say that as a suggestion for you, otherwise…
J: but you are plugged also?
L: Are you joking?
J: Ehmm no..
L: would you like to see what I am wearing? You had better to answer no… You could not get over the shook… I’m used to see my arsehole widen over a unimaginable size… but you don’t…
J:…
L: Baby…  loosing the ass is a way to limits mods…. As you can see I ‘m not such that modified. Ok, my tits are really big, as my lips… but the rest of the body is still ok… My ass is still in a reasonable size as my nose and my face… I do not have *WOMAN*ty tattoos or plenty of piercing. I saw some girls go out from here totally freak….You can’t imagine how much silicone Tony is able to pump in a girl body….
And what about some procedure like ballet boots feets?
Do you want exit from here being able to walk just on your toes?
You had better to follow my suggestions… stretch your arsehole as much as possible! Believe me!!!
Ok My plan could go on… now put on these… Lisa handed a monstrous pair of platform shoes, 25cm heels high with a 12cm high platform…., at least.
J: Are you kidding me? How can you think I could ever walk in that shoes?
L: come on is nothing too extreme… as you can notice they got chunky heel… Stop protest ant put them on.. they are quite high I know… but you have to remediate your fault….
I suggest apologizing with tony and showing off your buttplug and this heels…. You will not regret…
Remember you have to avoid the most surgery possible…. Or you will not have any more life after the experience here..
J: Otherwise?
L: Otherwise he could opt for a ballet shoes feet procedure of yours…..
J: what the fuck is that…
L: I don’t think you are ready to know it…
J: Tell me..
L: Ok, as you want, I warned you…. Is surgically procedure, your ankle and legs bones get cemented in a position like those one of classic dance ballerina and you will be no more able to move them ever in any way… ever! You’d have to walk on toes for the rest of your life…
The only shoes you will be able to Wear will be ballet boot…. A sort of fetish shoes… with no sole…. They help a bit…
I saw Only one girl go out from here in ballet shoes… but I do not want to be her… and If I were you, I  wouldn’t want be the next one….
Jasmine hurried up to get the 25cm platform shoes on. Then she stands up.
L: Great. How do they feel?
J: It’s near impossible to stand…..
L: ok make some practice and walk up and down…
Jasmine did some walks… on the room… staying barely on her… heels….
L: Pay attention to your balance… You have to get used with such heels… you have to improve your skill otherwise when your breast will be filled, you will have to walk on your four…
Jasmine begun to sweat.
L: Your makeup may be flacking… please stop. You have to focus on your balance… you cannot more walk as before… you have to think on every step… small step, a good girl do not run, if not necessary and turn slowly… everything has to be sensual…
J: I need to rest; these shoes are heavy… and uncomfortable.
L: Yes, they are… in few time you will get much toned thighs and calf…. Also because you will go to gym…

10Min later…

L: Ok, now you have to learn how to please tony.
Tomorrow when we will be back in his office you have to let him see your progress…As you are in the office, make sure  he notice your shoes and buttplug… you have to do a “show off” like good girls do… flexing a leg and showing off you heels… while you expose the buttplug. Did you understand?
J: I hope, indeed it will be really difficult stay on one feet with this skyscrapers…
L: try it now… ‘til you manage.
Lisa forced Jasmine to walk, on the absurd high heels shoes  and practice some  tricks...
L: Great, now we are going to the beauty saloon to get your hair and nails done… meanwhile I’ll give you some suggestions for you convenience… Tomorrow change back to your first  clothes… you know… when you go out you can dress in a less *WOMAN*ty way…. You know… otherwise we will be arrested….. for wrong dress code… Tomorrow remember to refresh your makeup… I mean, heavy as is heavy now... ok?
Jasmine nodded.
L: Ahhh Don’t try to take the buttplug out! Tony can check it at every moment…
Jasmine sighted….
L: One more thing…. Your punishment…
J: What?
L: You know… Sorry baby, but I have to give you instructions…. About how you are going to punish yourself….
J: Why, can’t you avoid them? I will never talk about…
L: Sorry Jas, but If Tony would discover…. I wolud regret…….  If you want you I did not check you up all time long…. But
Now let’s start….
BONUS SCENE TO DO….
The day after, Lisa took Jasmine to the beauty saloon, She get her hair and fingernails done. Lisa suggested her hair style, now her hair was hard blended red(blonde and her nails were red colored, 1inch long and perfectly square shaped.
It was time to check up her aspect by Tony...

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