https://mega.nz/file/gsIVxKaZ#8r1A_swBhv1viK4igU70rrSY8p7HLVxewUH60BjizMkI've been rewriting and typesetting this story, and adding Saidnuffman's visuals to it over the last 8 months or so. I don't know where Flexhero lives on the internet these days so was unable to ask his permission.
I've changed or added over 3000 words in this story, completely rewriting some sections. I did a lot of proofreading, and updated girls' descriptions to fit the images that Saidnuffman made. I also added new sections to try to make the students seem more distrustful and suspicious of John in the beginning.
Anyway - hope you enjoy!
One small sample of a section that is almost entirely new:
As they stepped through the front door, John’s eyes widened as he saw the entire cheerleading squad watching TV.
“Girls," Mrs. Barbie excitedly said, "this is John!”
“Hi John,” the girls said warily. Some of the teens started whispering to each other, while others simply gave the random boy a sidelong glance. Why was he at Mrs. Barbie’s house during cheer practice?
Ashley squinted at him, likely recognizing him from class. The teen had gorgeous dark hair that she loved to keep in a ponytail, with bangs partially swept over one of her eyes. The glossy brunette hair paired beautifully with her flashing brown eyes. Add in the the requisite toned body of a cheerleader and perky, perfectly proportioned C-cups (among the largest on the team), and Ashley was easily the hottest girl at the high school. John had had a crush on her for as long as he could remember, though the head cheerleader had hardly ever even looked at him. Perhaps that could change now.