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Writing Prompt: Coming Of Age
« on: August 09, 2021, 05:35:06 pm »
Does anyone know an erotica writer who can take this as a paypal/venmo commission and expand it into 10k+ words.


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A young woman coming of age story.
Written from the perspective of the young woman.

Raised by her mother that she was the ugly, but smart one. Unlike her older sister. She believed what she was told. The world rewarded hard work and smarts.

She was always a little... different, some called her autistic. She just knew she liked it when things were clear, made sense. The subtle emotions and tells didn't work for her. Rules. Facts and figures. Clear and obvious.

In school she faced the same story in a competitive private school. Frequently made fun of for not just her looks but her family's poverty.

Out of school she goes straight to work, providing for her mothers choice to live  in an upmarket area far too large for just the two of them.
The retail job is dreary and empty.

The rules about life from her mother just didnt seem to be adding up. There was something missing.

She begins dating. A bikie, a man who offers her drugs in exchange for sex, boring.
Her over-bearing mother frowns upon any of it, expecting her to care and provide for her erratic mother.

She meets a man she feels excited by. He is adventurous, intelligent, and well read.
She is 19, he's a little older, at 26 professional.
She is smitten at the first date.
Works in technology for a bank, a good earner, a hard worker, who enjoys adventure. But frugal like her.
They share many common beliefs and values.

There is never a quiet moment, there is always something else to talk about.
They love the same things, wonder about. They discuss history, and ideas. Not just people and things.


All the chemistry is right, but she can tell something is not right, like she is doing something wrong.
They're having a great time together, but intimacy isn't progressing.
The fourth date ends abruptly.
She texts him asking why.

He sits her down and honestly tells her what he expects.
He has specific tastes sexually.
Either obtuse of confusing, his details  of it, make it sounds like he's after a pin up doll.

She's 80kg, short, flat chested. Her makeup drawer is a single lipstick. Not a pin up doll.

He appreciates her for her personality, brains
but for some reason is interested in her.

She takes this challenge in her stride joyfully, learning makeup and dresses. Learning what nails are and getting used to them. A story of playful fun, and the new boyfriend's reaction at dates.

Adventures to experiences she has never had access to and more. After a month or two in a trip to the country, they stop waiting, and sleep together.

She begins spending nights at his home, and He begins financially supporting her, and by proxy her mother.

The pressure grows as within weeks the boyfriend lands a promotion, and is working with a more competitive, and feminine crowd at work.

Her story turns more difficult, darker, and his tone firms. Its always something else... Her nails aren't bright enough. Lashes not long enough. Hair not straight enough.
three inch heels aren't enough. Then four inch heels.
So many details that other girls seem to just naturally know what to do, she's left searching google constantly for things she never knew existed, her mother never told her, let alone thought important.

Disputes between the two keep coming up, primarily caused by her demanding mother constantly questioning when she will be home, what she is doing, and when she will be paying the money for rent.

When she complains that she doesn't know, He cruelly retorts how the women he works with seem to know just fine.

He begins to expect her to wear heels as part of every day wear, day and night. She begins enduring crippling pain and immobility of breaking a young womans feet into high heels for the first time.

He takes her on her first overseas trip.
Through the challenges of travel they bond together.

In european bars she sees instagram thin, bodycon stylish beautiful women. They march past her in heels twice as high as hers, while she hobbles on wondering every day of their trip how she will ever live up to these expectations.

Walking the streets of paris in three inch heels is one of the most delightful, exruciating, and wonderous experiences of her life.

Returning home, she delights to tell her mother about her journeys, and her blossoming relationship.
But her mother has had enough.
Calls her a whore, a sellout. She is cast out of home with only her suitcase.

Unwilling to swallow her pride, she calls her older sister for help.
Throughout these moths she has been relying on her sister for guidance.
Meeting for coffee she thought she could rely on her sisters help.
But her sister while seeming to be open and supportive, when she needs it just isn't there. She can't stay there, as her sister says, why wouldn't you just stay with new boyfriend?

She wanders the city for an hour trying to understand.

A tenous phone call to the new boyfriend is made asking to be picked up, she'll explain everything later.

She's clearly been crying.  At a coffee shop she explains the fight. IT was emotionally brutal. Her mother exploited every little detail of her character.
It seems they now live together. He embraces her sobbingly in his arms.

Despite the embrace he still isn't happy with how this turned out, it wasn't by choice.
And she can tell.
Moving her things into the home

Alone at home during the day she finds herself an abruptly minted housewife.

A lot more time, and a lot more image anxiety.

Researching on the internet
Then what she learns is 'hardmaxing'

She is stunned by what she finds.
It all finally makes sense!
Image. Image matters.
For years she was told how she looked didn't matter by women much better looking.
All around her she was brought down that she just needed to study, that how she looked wasn't important.
But all t he little signs were clear now.
It didn't matter how good a home she kept, the boyfriend's friends were asking 'what does she do all day'.

This was the answer.

The fights are getting louder. She's anxious constantly, and desperate.

For days she's been obsessed with reading, researching.
The facts, figures, and numbers make sense to her.


After dinner she sits him down.
She's put together a programme.
A plan, a series of big investments.

First, telling him her findings. An honest reflection of herself, and who she wants to be.

NExt, describing to him what he can expect.

Using instamgram accounts she found to show him examples:

The kind of makeup he can expect. Morning till night.
Tight fitting dresses with plenty of cleavage. Even when serving dinner.
High heels in the morning and the evening. Just not in the shower or in bed.
Acrylic nails and lashes, long. Brightly colored.

He's delighted.
He wants to ask why, and what she wants from him.
She says A budget for a maintenance routine,but asks him to wait until the end

Next, using clinics instagram pages, she shows the kind of Lip injections, and frozen face botox before and afters.
Describing the faces and the imagery.

Then the real 'hardmaxing' she's been reading about:

She wants A breast augmentation for him, and a gastric sleeve for her.

She's read into the specifics of under the muscle, 600 cc, silicone.
She's tried diet and exercise but to no avail.
This is the real deal.


Lastly she says this isn't the end. She wants a relationship to last for years and decades.

That means continued improvement, aspiration. Breast lift, Buttock implants, liposuction, arm lifts, tummy tucks. breast implant revisions and upsizing, double, triple the size. Every year something new.
She knows her body is not a great template to start, but she can't change that now.

She wants to commit to this relationship long term, and none of this should stop them.
She doesn't want fights over how other women look, she wants to be the woman in his life
And she wants to continue looking like this during amd after children too.

And she's asking for Tens of thousands of dollars of investment in her.





Themes:
Freedom of choice, but choosing the more difficult often unpleasant option.
All the while in a happy supportive, but aspirational relationship.
To please husband, and be pleased back






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