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Sexually Explicit Content (Appreciation) => Stories => Topic started by: chaychay on August 23, 2018, 06:21:38 am
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I just submitted Part One of my first BE story I've written to The Over Flowing Bra. It's all about a girl getting breast implants.
I'm open to sharing it here and elsewhere, but it has to be a PDF - it's formatted as a screenplay. Any suggestions of where else I can post it link to a PDF, and still remain anonymous?
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i cant see it on there yet mate.
but you could consider using mega.nz or mediafire. they're going to be reliable since its something you own.
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Gotta say, I am not seeing it on overflowing bra either.
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No reply from overflowingbra yet. Perhaps just as well, I just stumbled upon a few more spelling errors!
I found this file sharing service that's free and temporary. Let me know what you think! (especially if you spot any grammar issues!)
https://file.io/wsSgsN
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Link doesn't work for me
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Error 404 duder... File not found.
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Doh!!
Okay, tried mega.nz, like I should have in the first place!
https://mega.nz/#!L6oDzLZZ!M303ufzowm8hq4rzpmd-ZR7ZuhEM-9yROh-R8X6euWo
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Loved it, I am eager for part 2 :)
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Great read so far!
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Brilliant stuff chaychay! 8)
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chaychay that is a great story so far. please don't be like other stories on here that have a "Part 1" but never have a continuation.
Personally I don't like the layout of it being like a movie script but it i have to saw that it adds a better visualization to the story.
Great story, can't wait for more.
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Part 2 is in the works! Actually, most of part 3 is already done. I just need to figure out how to end part 2.
Thanks for the support everyone!
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Excellent news that the next chapter is on it's way.
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here is a tumblr site that will host your story, too.
http://boobstories.tumblr.com
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Hows it going ChayChay. Any estimates on when there might be a second part?
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Alas, no estimates right now.
My day job has most of my attention right now (that, and a cold... boo).
Hopefully by the end of the month?
I'm also stuck on a plot point... I'll crack it soon enough.
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Thanks for the update, please keep us posted :)
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can't wait too !! :)
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Hows it going Chaychay. any chance of an update soon
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Nice. Now where's the rest...
Part 2 is in the works! Actually, most of part 3 is already done. I just need to figure out how to end part 2.
Thanks for the support everyone!
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Hey everyone, sorry about the long wait.
I'm trying to keep this as realistic as possible, and I kinda don't want to miss any beats. So, I've still got at least one more scene to go before it'll be worth sharing. To be honest, part two is kind of boring right now!
Anyways, I'll get'r done soon enough. Thanks for your patience everyone!
Oh say - are you someone who has gotten her breasts done? I'd love to ask you a few questions about recovery if you'd be open to it.
Thanks!
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How's it going chaychay.
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any news ? ;( don't want to pressurize :)
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Hi all!
Pardon my delay. I was just reading over my Part 2 - and it's really close. But there's just a chunk in the middle that's missing and I'm not sure how to fill it in. That's what's holding me up.
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Thank you for all the encouragement!
I've finished a draft. I want to proof-read one more time before sharing. In all likeliness, I'll post it tonight!
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Can't wait!
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Finally!
Here is the script, parts 1 and 2 merged into a single PDF. Part two begins on page 30.
https://mega.nz/#!v2wGiATT!2D3lUoFn5YHwJO2MsCOy-9bBvOV5mBCDJXzQOUFsLtw
I'm a little fuzzy on what part three will contain. I look forward to your feedback. PM me if you have any plot ideas.
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You are a legend. Look forward to reading it tonight.
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really good even if would have hopped for a more longer scene with raven discovering her implants and play with them before showing to josh or daniel
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really good even if would have hopped for a more longer scene with raven discovering her implants and play with them before showing to josh or daniel
Oh damn! That's such an obvious and good idea. And it would fit in right where I was having trouble bridging scenes. Go figure!
Okay... I've gotta do a flashback or something. Normally I hate flashbacks, but I think I might try to make it work. I really want to explore her first time alone with herself. Thanks Widemind!
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really good even if would have hopped for a more longer scene with raven discovering her implants and play with them before showing to josh or daniel
Oh damn! That's such an obvious and good idea. And it would fit in right where I was having trouble bridging scenes. Go figure!
Okay... I've gotta do a flashback or something. Normally I hate flashbacks, but I think I might try to make it work. I really want to explore her first time alone with herself. Thanks Widemind!
thanks thanks thanks thanks !!!
In this kind of story , i don't bother about the guys , i'm more focused about what bring woman having the kind of surgeries ;)
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How's it going chaychay? Any updates?
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great story
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Just re-read the story last night and am hanging for some more, maybe like others have suggested a flash back to the her first time shopping for the new boobs.
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Just re-read the story last night and am hanging for some more, maybe like others have suggested a flash back to the her first time shopping for the new boobs.
Thank you for the encouragement!
I won't be getting back to this in the immediate future - I'm actually busy working on a script for my real-life job. Once I get that script done, I'll be able to pay attention to this one again.
Cheers!
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Hi Chay Chay, just wondering when you might be able to continue this story. Maybe with flashbacks including more of the recovery process.
Appreciate the Hard work you put in.
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Hi Chay Chay, just wondering when you might be able to continue this story. Maybe with flashbacks including more of the recovery process.
Appreciate the Hard work you put in.
As a matter of fact, I've been thinking about this a bit lately. First time in a while. Life kinda got in the way (including an opportunity to actually pitch a screenplay that includes a touch of breast expansion to a legit production studio!)
I've decided, rather than doing flashbacks - I'll just add the scenes in that I feel are overlooked. I'll publish a new revision when I do! Usually when I write, I don't write in order - but I also don't usually share until it's done. This is definitely outside my normal zone!
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That's great to hear. Can wait to read it.
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I regret that I haven't worked on this story in a long time. But I thought I'd share quick story related to my script, in real life.
Last night I went to a local strip club - my favourite one in town. Alas, it wasn't a night with a lot of enhanced ladies. Some good lookers, but very few with fake boobs.
Anyways, this very very fair skinned light blond girl kept passing me. With the near ultra-violet lighting in there, she is so white that she almost glowed. She had nice breasts as far as natural boobs go. Great body. Just when I was thinking of leaving, she sits next to me and strikes up a conversation. She's young, intellectual, gorgeous face. When she finally gets around to asking me for a dance, I figure why not?
We go to the back room and wait for the current song to end before we begin. She sits on my lap and we chat some more. Somewhere in there, she mentions her breasts are real. To which I said "funny you mention that, I knew that - but I actually only never get dances with natural girls. I kinda have a thing for fake boobs, but something about you made me decide to forget about that." She was very positive about that. I like it when dancers or massage attendance don't defend, rather embrace and support men's desires. The song ends, the next one starts - marking the beginning of Song #1. Her dance was sensual, rubbing her self all over me. She turns around lifting her hair as she gyrates. Her body is amazing. Her skin is flawless. She reaches back and undoes her bra, then turns back revealing the goods. They're very nice boobs. Quite firm. She must have been in her very early 20's, so that part didn't surprise me. Finally, I ask her "You really don't need to, but have you ever thought about getting them done?" She sorta stops, thinks, and says "I would, but only if someone else paid for it. Like maybe if I could afford it some day - but for now, it would have to be someone else paying." Needless to say, I was super turned on. Then I told her - "Believe it or not, I've been writing a screenplay about almost exactly that. Some rich guy meets a hot girl who offers to buy her boobs, make her even hotter." She gets really into it, asking me more about it. Like are you a writer for a living? I am, which is why I never get around to work on The Agreement - because I have other things I sorta have to focus on. I also told her, unfortunately - I'm not rich. So I'm not that guy who could buy her boobs, but man would I love to. Thinking of my fiction, I then ask her "so let's just say I am rich, and I want to buy you boobs - you'd be interested." She nods very enthusiastically. Then I push further, "Okay, but what if there is a condition that I get to choose the size." She looks at me suspiciously, "Like, how big?" I told her, "I'd want to go pretty big. Like, at first I'd tell you 500cc's, gauge your reaction then maybe push for 600cc's... or more." I don't think she quite knew what that meant. She asked me how big in cup size, so that's when we started miming how big we're talking about. She just kept agreeing. I even told her more about my script "In the story, he picks a huge size for her which is too big for her frame - on the condition that after one year if she still thinks they're too big, he'll agree to pay to have them changed to whatever size she wants."
She even seemed into that. Then she asked me about getting her lips done. That's something she actually wants to get done in the near future. I kinda dig enhanced lips, on only to a point. She already has insane lips. If she hadn't said that I would have thought she'd already gotten work done, but she hasn't... yet.
By this point, my wallet was basically going to be empty. So after three songs or $60 our time together was over. I thanked her politely.
I'm going to keep an eye on this one.
I've got to get back into writing this script. I've appreciated the feedback, and want to incorporate some of the suggestions given to me. But alas, I have a lot of day-job related work ahead of me still. I'm hoping as my slow seasons comes upon us I'll get to work on it again.
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Thank you chaychay,
for sharing that little story. It makes the actual story all that more interesting and even more worth the wait.
I really appreciated that little bit of personal live. :D
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Hi chaychay, has covid 19 slowed down your day job at all. Absolutely loved this story and want it to continue
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Hi chaychay, has covid 19 slowed down your day job at all. Absolutely loved this story and want it to continue
I got a little bit of work done on it last night. First time I've looked at in almost a year. I mostly touched up what I've written before.
really good even if would have hopped for a more longer scene with raven discovering her implants and play with them before showing to josh or daniel
I'm keeping this in mind - this suggestion is definitely a scene that was overlooked. So in my next upload, there will be new material prior to Josh's appearance.
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There is more hype in this thread than a Sabrina Sabrok 'new boob job' announcement.
Oh oh! That's a lot to live up to!
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any post covid news ?
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any post covid news ?
Regrettably, I haven't done anything with this since I last updated you guys. This pandemic has taken quite the emotional toll on me, as a result I've done very little creative work... Which is especially troubling, considering the fact that I work in a creative field!
Once again, I'd like to thank everyone for their encouragement. It is nice to know there is still interest. I'll come back to this one day! I swear!