I checked the file and it seemed ok to me, so I've removed and re-upped part 2. Try that and let me know if it works ok now?
Also, regarding chapter 11. I have still some older content ready to go, but I need to create some new stuff to fill the gaps and I've hit a bit of a wall narratively. I realise there is not exactly much narrative involved (Girl next door becomes a plastic *WOMAN*) but I'd like it to have some degree of story to it and I'm aware the last part wasn't so well received.
Basically, feedback is appreciated, as I would still like to do some more of this before I call it...