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Re: Becoming_*WOMAN* (Fake lips, boobs, ass, schoolgirl, transformation)
« Reply #195 on: July 31, 2015, 12:03:15 am »
FINALLY!
SO MUCH WORTH THE WAIT (yeah, I'm repeating myself, but this story is absolutely sexy!).... PURE ORGASM IN CHAPTERS. Each one so powerful, vivid, exciting.
You rock!

(the only downside is that we have to patiently wait for the next part now ;) )
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Re: Becoming_*WOMAN* (Fake lips, boobs, ass, schoolgirl, transformation)
« Reply #196 on: July 31, 2015, 11:34:22 am »
I just read it for the third time, what a TEASER! Great to have some seducing Plastic Bimbo Milf Action here.

thx,

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Re: Becoming_*WOMAN* (Fake lips, boobs, ass, schoolgirl, transformation)
« Reply #197 on: August 04, 2015, 06:59:30 am »
Oh my God, I can't read this now otherwise I'll will have no control over myself. I've gone without super fake bimbo stories for too long and the thirst is just too much. The expectation is already excruciating.

John, have you considered making some kind of donation profile like patreon? Your talent is real for these: you share the cravings of many and you know how to put them on paper. Your theme is also difficult to find done in such high octane writing. Maybe if you are unsure about the need to do frequent updates you could propose a bi-monthly release to the donators in your pitch. I'm not sure how to properly run a patreon; I do negotiate drawings on Deviant Art and the need to be regular and provide constantly is what I fear with such donation sites, so maybe that's what you are feeling too. With a relaxed schedule you may not stress yourself with your hobby and also make a much justified profit out of it, providing what is probably the very best fake bimbo erotica ever written.

Thanks everyone for the feedback!

Papael, thanks so much for the kind words. I hadn't really thought of a patreon before, I'll think this over some. If you or anyone feels like this is something you'd like to support then let me know (you can either reply here or send me a message). I will say I wouldn't do that unless I feel like it's something I could produce regularly, and I'm not sure that's possible at the moment, but maybe a couple of months from now.

I'm still working on the second half, sorry for the wait! On the bright side I wrote some chapters that come after this a long time ago, so hopefully I can get the next two or three out in a reasonable time.

My TPB story: Becoming_*WOMAN* - The transformation of a plain girl, into perfect plastic sexual doll.

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Re: Becoming_*WOMAN* (Fake lips, boobs, ass, schoolgirl, transformation)
« Reply #198 on: August 04, 2015, 08:51:25 am »
thx johnd :-) best story ever.

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Re: Becoming_*WOMAN* (Fake lips, boobs, ass, schoolgirl, transformation)
« Reply #199 on: August 07, 2015, 10:24:20 pm »
I would do the three dollar a month donation for monthly chapters. Or 1 dollar a month for bi-monthly chapter. You would have to spread this story around to check what the potential is. Do you post them on your tumblr? You gotta post at the Overflowing Bra at least. I don't know what other websites to try.

Apparently you can also sell some original stuff to the BE story sites. I read about an author last month who was selling there, but I don't know any details. In this case I would likely not read though, since I suppose we are talking about expensive membership sites. You would get your money beforehand though (I think).

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Re: Becoming_*WOMAN* (Fake lips, boobs, ass, schoolgirl, transformation)
« Reply #200 on: August 13, 2015, 09:21:58 am »
Oh my God, I can't read this now otherwise I'll will have no control over myself. I've gone without super fake bimbo stories for too long and the thirst is just too much. The expectation is already excruciating.

John, have you considered making some kind of donation profile like patreon? Your talent is real for these: you share the cravings of many and you know how to put them on paper. Your theme is also difficult to find done in such high octane writing. Maybe if you are unsure about the need to do frequent updates you could propose a bi-monthly release to the donators in your pitch. I'm not sure how to properly run a patreon; I do negotiate drawings on Deviant Art and the need to be regular and provide constantly is what I fear with such donation sites, so maybe that's what you are feeling too. With a relaxed schedule you may not stress yourself with your hobby and also make a much justified profit out of it, providing what is probably the very best fake bimbo erotica ever written.

Thanks everyone for the feedback!

Papael, thanks so much for the kind words. I hadn't really thought of a patreon before, I'll think this over some. If you or anyone feels like this is something you'd like to support then let me know (you can either reply here or send me a message). I will say I wouldn't do that unless I feel like it's something I could produce regularly, and I'm not sure that's possible at the moment, but maybe a couple of months from now.

I'm still working on the second half, sorry for the wait! On the bright side I wrote some chapters that come after this a long time ago, so hopefully I can get the next two or three out in a reasonable time.



If you get to the point where you feel like you can comfortably produce new chapters on a  regular basis I'd be happy to become a patron as well.

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Re: Becoming_*WOMAN* (Fake lips, boobs, ass, schoolgirl, transformation)
« Reply #201 on: August 22, 2015, 09:10:38 pm »
This story is total masterpiece! Can't wait for more ;)

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Re: Becoming_*WOMAN* (Fake lips, boobs, ass, schoolgirl, transformation)
« Reply #202 on: November 16, 2015, 08:08:21 pm »
any news of this masterpiece ... please ?  :P
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Re: Becoming_*WOMAN* (Fake lips, boobs, ass, schoolgirl, transformation)
« Reply #203 on: November 18, 2015, 04:04:12 am »



Chapter 32 - Animal House Part 2



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   *Thwack* *Thwack* *Thwack* The sound of a swollen cock as it slaps against its target. Thwack* "God!" *Thwack* "Yes!" *Thwack* *Thwack* "Beat my *WOMAN* lips with that big fat cock!" *Thwack* There was something Cindy enjoyed about a dick smacking against her cock pillow lips, the feeling of excitement, the hope of soon being splattered by cum.
   
   "Oh fuck, take my cock you dirty fucking *WOMAN*!" Rod held the base of his engorged dick, shaking it up and down as it smashed into the bimbo's puffy, ridiculous lips. Each time his meat splattered against her cock pillow mouth he felt a wave of pleasure tear through his entire body, "Fuck! *WOMAN*ty whore!" *Thwack* *Thwack* "You fucking ridiculous looking blonde, plastic, bimbo, trashy, whore!" *Thwack* "Fucking cum dump!" *Thwack* He was getting off on calling her these dirty names, on abusing her face cunt with his dick.
   
   Cindy would have rather he face fucked her mouth and deposited a load of gooey cream directly into her stomach, but some times you had to give a little to get a lot. She wanted the entire room of frat boys to see Rod blow his load all over her dolled up, *WOMAN*ty face. They were all watching, wishing they were one the beating her mouth with fat cock and about to cover her in cum, "Gimme that big load of cum! Gimme it! Gimme it! Gimme it! Fucking drown me in it! Fucking feed this *WOMAN* your big fucking load of cream! Shoot it you big fucking stud!"
   
   "Dirty!" *Thwack* "Fucking!" *Thwack* "Barbie!" *Thwack* "*WOMAN*!" *Thwack* "Trashy!" *Thwack* "Bimbo!" *Thwack* "Fuck meat!" Rod was about to blow the biggest load of his life. He couldn't take his eyes off the plastic *WOMAN* he had barely met 10 minutes ago. She was down on her knees in front of him as he beat her face with his swollen fuck stick. Her face was remarkable, covered in make up, fake eyelashes long and dark to contrast against her beach blonde hair, everything perfect. Those lips, those fucking lips, he had never seen lips like that before, not even in porn. Big, swollen, puffy pads to smack his cock against. *Thwack* *Thwack* He was going to cover her in a bucket of cum, "Cum *WOMAN*!"
   
    She had plenty of skills, but there was one she was most proud of. Cindy knew how to unlock the deep, dirty, forbidden, repressed lust in men. The things that they dreamed about doing to some woman, that lay hidden, behind a lifetime of society telling them that they could never do. The idea of having a plastic barbie toy, who's only purpose in life was to make sure your dick was worshipped and your balls empty of cum. That idea, that deep fantasy that they were scared to tell even their best friend? Well she made them comfortable enough to embrace it. That was her skill, unlocking the perverted animal in men, who would treat her like a rag doll to wipe off their cum covered cock after they got done splattering her with jizz. 
   
    It only took a few minutes with Rod before Cindy had him calling her a cum dump, a barbie *WOMAN*. That's what made Cindy wet with hunger, dripping cunt juices, that she could turn mild mannered boys into dirty fuck pigs for her pleasure. That was a skill that most woman simply did not have. Even without the perfect body, the huge plastic filled tits, jumbo dick sucking lips, the barbie doll face, even without all that, she was the absolutely dirtiest *WOMAN* you'll ever come across. Those other things, in addition to her attitude are what made her into the perfect woman to drain cock meat.
   
    "Holy fuck!" His whole body tensed as tight as a wound spring. "Uggggghhhhhhh! Take it you fucking plastic cum whore!" Rod was finally going to drown this beautiful plastic barbie toy in cum.
   
    Cindy was being beaten all over her lips and face with Rod's engorged prick, smacked silly with cock. She was putting on a performance for all of the frat boys in the room. She saw out of the corner of her eyes one boy unzip his pants and pull out a stiff swollen cock, he immediately began jacking himself furiously to the real life porno he was watching take place a few feet away. Another boy seeing his friend do it, did the same, unzipping and jerking off wildly, pounding his fist up and down his meat, as he watched his frat brother spank a perfect blonde bimbo with his swollen dick. Then the rest of them were doing it too, some scared, some afraid of what was happening, but unable to stop themselves from freeing their swollen meat and jerking and jacking their pricks to the plastic bimbo, the fuck meat, the dark cum toy fantasy in front of them.
       
   Prim, proper young teenage gentlemen, turned into wild lust filled, cum squirting cock hoses, that's what made Cindy wet. Corrupting these boys. Changing their lives so that they'd never be sexually satisfied again unless they were using a plastic bimbo toy. Cindy looked up into Rod's eyes as he smashed his fat cock against her duck faced, puffy lips and exploded cum all over her face. He groaned like an animal as his first spurt of cum shot with such force that it blasted against her lips and splattered all over the room. Sending a shower of cum splashing around her and onto her tits. Cindy rubbed her oversized clit and came with a single touch. An explosion of feeling shooting through every nerve in her body.
   
   "Oh yeah! Fuck! FUCK!" Rod's eyes flickered, he tried focusing on her - her cum splattered, dolled up, caked on - face. The face of a plastic bimbo toy. The second spurt of cream from his dick wasn't as strong as the last. He squirted a wave of jizz across her cheek and into one of her ridiculous looking fake eyelash. The only thing he could think of was the power of covering her in cum. Covering this dirty barbie *WOMAN* with cum, she wanted his cum so badly and he was going to give it to dirty cum obsessed fake whore. He was giving this dirty toy exactly what she wanted, "Arghhhhh Fucking cum dump! Take it! Fucking dirty cum doll!"
   
   Ultimate power, feral, lust infused power to corrupt. Cindy loved it, she was the desire of every boy in this room, and after having them watch Rod splatter her with cum she was hoping she'd have a room full of young frat boys ready to use her plastic porn star body like their cum rag. The thought of young cocks in all of her hot needy holes, in her hands, squirting hot creamy thick cum into her every opening, made her cum as hard as she ever had. Cindy loved the idea of being the plastic fuck toy for a frat house, their gang bang porno doll, their braindead cock filled empty headed cum dump. Between her tits, inside her pussy, in her ass, her mouth, in her fists, cocks surrounding her, ready to worship their plastic bimbo *WOMAN* with cum.
   
   After the third spurt splattered her face Cindy had lost control of her body, her mouth opened, those perfect big cock sucking lips parting wide as she swallowed Rod's fat cock down her hungry throat. She couldn't help it, she had to have that cum squirting into her stomach, she needed his young hot fertile sticky seed shooting down her throat. It turned her wild to know a room full of boys was watching her eat cum straight from Rod's big cock. She felt like a complete *WOMAN*ty whore, and she bet everything that they would love her, need her, want her more than anything they've ever wanted because of it.
   
   One minute he was smashing his cock against her lips, slapping her with dick meat, and the next the fuck puppet's mouth was swallowing every inch of his spurting swollen prick. Rod didn't have to think about acting, his body instinctively responded by thrusting his hips forward and slamming his squirting prick into the depths of her cock hungry throat. He forcefully banged every inch into her starving gullet until her lower lip crunched against his cum churning balls. He had to spread his legs wide so that her giant inflated plastic tits didn't get in the way.
   
   Rod grabbed the back of her head and held her there, his cock in the depths of her hungry cum dump throat, "Swallow it! Ohhhhhh shit! She's milking my cum with her throat! Fucking dirty plastic barbie fuck *WOMAN*! EAT IT! FUCKING EAT IT! EAT MY FUCKING DIRTY CUM YOU FUCKING COCK HUNGRY CUM SWALLOWING BIMBO! I'M SHOOTING IT RIGHT INTO HER STOMACH! AHHHHHHHH! OH SHIT! SHE'S SUCKING OUT EVERY LAST DROP OF JIZZ"
   
   Cindy gulped his gooey fuck sauce down, his cock head deep in her throat, she could feel each pulse of his meat as it squirted a warm jet of sticky hot cream directly down her throat. Like a hot drink she could feel the warm fluid heating her stomach and driving her wild with dirty hunger. She turned her cum splattered face up towards him, so that he could see her eyes, one of hic thick fake lashes splattered with his jizz. She blinked and gulped down his fuck cream as more baby batter poured directly into her bimbo stomach.
      
    "Shit! Shit! She's eating it all, she's draining my fucking balls!" Rod grabbed her hair and held her head in place as he pushed forward trying to stuff every inch of his hard squirting prick into her mouth, "Eat it all! You dirty fucking cum swallowing *WOMAN*! Look at you! Look at that dirty plastic barbie face, nasty fucking cum starved *WOMAN*! I'm putting all my fucking cum right into your stomach you plastic cum *WOMAN*! All of it, eat all of it, fuck!" He threw back his head and howled.
   
    Cindy grabbed at her giant fake tits with her hands, squeezing and kneading the inflated tit flesh as she moaned and creamed around the thick meat in her throat, "Mmmmpppphhhhhhhhhhhh!" Her eyes rolled into the back of her head as another wave of pleasure washed over her, another small orgasm sending her body into shivers as she pulled incredibly hard on her sensitive nipples.
   
    When she regained her senses she realized that Rod was no longer squirting his fuck sauce into her stomach, his cum explosion finally at an end. Cindy began to pull back her head and huge lips pulling his foreskin back as more cum oozed out of his cock and onto her tongue. That's when she started to hear the mutters and groans around her, "Look at that dirty fucking cock *WOMAN*...", "Fuck, she swallowed every fucking drop", "Look at those huge plastic tits", the sound of a room full of horny boys worshipping her.
   
    Her mouth popped off Rod's cock with a loud slurp, Cindy immediately grabbed at it with her hands and jacked it off, pumping the meat with hunger, wanting it to stay hard and ready. The last of his cum dribbled out of the piss slit and Cindy made a show of licking it up with her tongue, "God! What a good fucking boy, you fed me a huge dirty load of that cum cream! Show all our frat brothers what a good cock toy does to his plastic barbie *WOMAN*? How you emptied those balls down your pet's stomach?"
   
    Cindy smiled seductively at him as he was nodding his head vigorously, she could tell he was already feeling the endorphins rushing to his cock again at her words. She stood up, one hand jacking off his stiff prick while the other wiped up the cum on her face and fed it between her inflated cock sucking lips, "Mmmmmmmmmmm... I want more fuck cream, I want so much more, this plastic bimbo needs gallons of it. You ready to use one of my other holes now you nasty boy?"
   
    She pulled Rod by his dick towards the couch, two boys had been sitting there playing video games, now they were hammering away on their stiff meat, the game controllers tossed aside. She leaned over the couch right between the two boys, her huge basketball sized implants in their faces. Cindy spoke to Rod, "Which hole do you want next baby? Which hole do you want to flood your plastic *WOMAN* with cum in next? My tight *WOMAN*ty little barbie pussy, or my nasty dirty hot ass?" Cindy was rubbing Rod's dick up and down between her two holes, moaning as she felt his throbbing dick rub slightly against her oversized clit.
   
    "That dirty whore asshole! That filthy *WOMAN* cock hole! Fucking nasty dirty trashy bitch!" Rod began all to eagerly stuffing his prick into her dark tight asshole, plunging inside her as he grabbed her hips and immediately began fucking his toy. He watched with hunger and lust filled eyes as his dick buried itself inside her anal opening. She began moaning like a pornstar.
   
    "Give it to me baby, give it to me your big fuck stud!" Cindy was being pounded by Rod, he was lost in lust for her body, the feeling overwhelmed her, the absolute power. She looked around the room full of hungry, literally throbbing boys, and smiled like an evil cum seducing dirty whore, "You boys want to use this cum rag too?"
   
    A chorus of fuck yeahs erupted around her, stiff pricks leaking as they stared at her body. Cindy knew she had them, "There is two conditions boys, one you don't waste a single drop of that fuck cream, every ounce of your cum belongs to me, and two you're going to owe me a favor, when I expect it to be paid you will do without question exactly what I ask. Those are the conditions to use my body."
   
    One of the boys yelled, "What kind of favor?" He was quickly shoved aside by one of his frat brothers, "Does it fucking matter? I'd do anything to shove my cock between those lips!" A room of cheers erupted, the boy who had said it pushed forward a big stiff prick in his hand, and then he was pushing between Cindy's puffy dick swallowing lips just like he said.    
   
    Cindy swallowed his meat, like only a hungry barbie fuck pet could, inches of thick shaft sliding across her tongue and into the depths of her throat. She couldn't help but grin around his cock, at the room of boys, and think to herself that everything was 'cumming' together nicely. She would worry about that later though, for now she had a room of horny young studs and it was her job to make sure they would never look at another woman again without thinking of her - their frat fuck pet.
   
   
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I had this done for awhile but just never got around to posting it. There is a little more I want to add so I might fix a few things at some point and add a few more sections to this last chapter.
« Last Edit: November 21, 2015, 09:48:41 pm by johnd »
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Re: Becoming_*WOMAN* (Fake lips, boobs, ass, schoolgirl, transformation)
« Reply #204 on: November 18, 2015, 02:21:28 pm »
wow so hot! thank you thank you thank you  ;D
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Re: Becoming_*WOMAN* (Fake lips, boobs, ass, schoolgirl, transformation)
« Reply #205 on: November 18, 2015, 11:58:29 pm »
Please, update more!
This orgasm needs to last much longer :D :D

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Re: Becoming_*WOMAN* (Fake lips, boobs, ass, schoolgirl, transformation)
« Reply #206 on: November 19, 2015, 12:07:59 pm »
Cock twitching-, ready- to- explode-, pre-cumming new chapter,

Thanks, Johnd!
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Re: Becoming_*WOMAN* (Fake lips, boobs, ass, schoolgirl, transformation)
« Reply #207 on: December 15, 2015, 10:07:22 pm »
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I happened onto this series through mere chance. My stumbling upon it was the result of a proverbial “luck of the draw” as I used keyword searches to find anything (story or otherwise) having to do with naughty females shamelessly jacking a man to orgasm through his pants/trousers/shorts, etc. So, I must say that frankly; reading through your story—all of the installments—has left me sticky, wet and drained! But, I especially loved the flow and intensity within the sections wherein one or the other of your female characters brought their helpless and overwhelmed male admirers to soaking, sticky orgasms by beating off their stiff boners right through their pants.

The one section I read and re-read—each time, bringing my dick to a spurting climax—was Chapter 20 “Sex Education,” where Cindy not only masturbates the shy Andy’s clothed erection through the fabric of his tented and soaked pants, but she actually sucks the shooting, sperm-belching head of his cock through the saturated cloth! For me, the only element missing in that senario was reading about that uber-sexy bad girl receiving some of his hot, spent and filtered cum all over her face—the sperm forced out through the material, by pent-up lust, in visible ribbons creaming against her lips and cheeks!...I’m not complaining, mind you! Not at all! I’m just embellishing. 
 
I don’t mind telling you that I wasted quite a few sperm cells reading Chapter 30 “Time to Ride,” as well!

So, thank you for this HOT work!

Yours (a fellow erotic writer),
George Tyerbyter

PS - I hope this story continues in some way, shape or form!

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Re: Becoming_*WOMAN* (Fake lips, boobs, ass, schoolgirl, transformation)
« Reply #208 on: December 23, 2015, 06:15:11 am »
George, thanks so much for the detailed feedback!

I really love hearing what people think about my work and what they liked best. I also appreciated you pointing out what chapters you enjoyed the most.

I'm doing my best to write more, but life is just a lot busier now than it was a couple of years ago. It's hard to find the time and seclusion to sit down and get stuff written out. I still have quite a few plot lines I'd like to wrap up and new ones I'd like to explore.

Thanks again for taking the time to let me know!

If anyone else out there wants to point out what you've enjoyed I'd love hear from you too. :)
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Re: Becoming_*WOMAN* (Fake lips, boobs, ass, schoolgirl, transformation)
« Reply #209 on: January 04, 2016, 01:57:36 pm »
Hi,
Just read the last chapter again and I'm extremely looking forward to see what Cindy will do with her powers over those barbie crazed boys. Some humiliation of a natural 'smart' girl oder some other evil action that puts lust over morals...

Cheers,
Barbielover

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